NO OFFENSE BUT LIZZIE IS NOT A LESBO AND NEITHER IS ISABELLA CUZ COMMON T THEYR THE SAME PRSON JST SAYING THT MAYBE U SHULD WRITE BOUT SOMETHING ELSE CUZ THT MOVIE WAS AWESOME!

The chapters are short, the characters are ooc, and you need to use more description. I suggest you work on these and spelling as well as paragraph building.

Lizzie is a lessbien? why?

lol i never really liked gordo anyways. love it, more please?

if i WERE gordo one of my arguments would be 'she looks just like you though! doesn't that make you a little bit narcissistic? and ppl will think ur sisters?' lol this amused me. more please

Dude woah! As much as i love this show. it would be crazy if she turned out to be fruity. But god plot. keep writing i want to read more

TWINCEST! Interesting idea though.

Please don't stop there.

write more!
write more!!
write more!

poor gordo!

O, this is good.
Please update soon.