What's the decision. Such a crazy cliffhanger. Are they gonna stay together? Is he gonna change and if he is does will he resent Edward? Would love to see this updated if you all are still interested in this fiction or the universe. Enjoyed the story it was an interesting take on the Twilight World.

Please... just 1 more chapter. I know you can do it!

Thank you for writing: )

If Jake give up his wolf spirit then he will die - like a real wolf spirit is what's allowing him to live for ever if he choose to.

This chapter was good but what was up with that girl popping up from out of no where. I thought the Cullens house was isolated?

I am truly sick of Victoria. Didn't she kill Bella at the beginnning of this story? Or am I mistaken.

This was funny - poor Billy. Hell Poor Jake and Ed - are they ever going to go at it?

This chapter was really good. Baseball and a pole through the chest cavity.

Rose and Sam are crazy.

Ohh, no!

What was Jake's choice!

Very nive:)

Oh god... that was the most amazing... GREAT FIC! CANT WAIT FOR THE FINALLY :D!

This is pretty good so far. I'm enjoying, though I admit it's a little weird after having read all of the original books. There are a couple of small spelling and grammatical glitches but nothing serious enough to detract away from the story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to find out what happens.

I am enjoying this story. Though you might want to go through the chapters and do a little more editing... you seem to be repeating paragraphs every once in a while. Noticed it about four or five times in chapters 1 & 2. Thought you should know.

That. Was. HOT.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! AND MY MOM IS GOING TO KILL ME, I JUST COULDN'T STOP READING AND IT IS 2:30 IN THE MORNING. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! UPDATE SOON!

Wow great chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON CAUSE I REALLY WANT TO KNOW JAKE'S DECISION ! :)

I can't wait for more! :)

Sad that it's almost over though. :(