yikes wow this is getting climactic i cant wait for more!

Balthier!! He has to fess up a bit now that the world is almost ending and Vaan has already died once. Agh I need more interaction. Sometimes I feel like Basch is more enamoured of Vaan than Balthier.
And it's to Archades and Dr. Cid we go..

I really like it and i cant wwait for more! ^^

i think Balthier and Vann need some alone time later on.

Kol. It's time for Cid's ** to be kicked!

And that last Shard to be found.

But I wonder if Ashe will still go on her path of destruction?

yay you updated. im so happy. this story is so really good and the grammer and spelling is excellent. i hope for fast updates to continue

oh... nice and dark... love the back from teh dead moment

*interwebz hug* i'm so happy you brought him back! things are totally heating up now since they're gonna be heading to archades... the final stones... oh i simply can't wait till you update ^_^

okay you'll live for now! great chappie!

wow impressive story so for i can't wait for more dude this is awesome!

he lives again and i'll forgive you but it did give some glow that the leading man is falling in love with Vann.

his name is Judge Bergan one real sadistic bastard!

I forgive you. Besides, all stories can't ALL be happy all the way through.

<3

Interesting chapter, that attack could not have been healthy for Basch... or maybe it was? I honestly do not know where you are going with Basch, it makes me curious. I'm happy to see that you have been adding some more detail to balance your dialogue. If you had mentioned that the judge Basch and Balthier remorseless slaughtered was bergan that would have been nice. It took me a moment to remember which judge you face off against on Mt. Bur-Omisace. keep up the good work.

WHAT THE HELL!? oh i wont kill you...yet you still have to finish the fic and depending on how its ends...we'll see if u get to live damn poor Balthier