Ne thunder and lighting are great!

awwwwwwwww that soo cute!

Aw, young Allen's so cute.

Aw! Cross you big softy! I LOVE it! The ending made me giggle. Oh, poor Allen. :D This was so cute!

LoTuS

I love thunder and lightning too

Lol, poor Allen. Once Cross decides to teach something, it's a living Hell XD But he's probably just making up for kindness XP

Great job. Keep it up

i really liked this story but cross is scary. he's even mean in his thoughts. (shudders and then runs and hides)

Weah, what a cute ff! I allways had a knack for Cross and wanted to know more about Allen's time with him. Your story was really worth the time and and wonderful mix of a cute scene but also charas who are still in character.

Your Melfis.

P.s. Please, write more Cross/ Allen ffs! *look at you with big puppy eyes*

... Okay, I'm resisting the urge to go grammar crazy despite the mass number of typos since I don't have time. XP

There's one major issue I want to point out: Cross does not say "Che." That's a Kanda thing to say. I could see Cross being a jerk about Allen's astrophobia, but he would never say "Che."

Other than that and typos, I enjoyed it. :)

Thunder & lightining is so much fun to watch! Cute fic by the way!

Haha. I always like to read stories about Cross and Allen(: And you were pretty good in describing Cross' feelings(: