I really like this and would like to see what happens next.

Okay what next?

I like it

I like this story but u should make the kidnapper kidnapp the rest of the u make a story where theres a killer like scream where he calls his victim

"Yes... I have a better map in the car though, just come over and you can point out the streets I should take."

Naoko shrugged. "Okay."

She walked over..."

THAT IS SOOO STUPID DOESNT SHE KNOW NEVER TO DO THAT!

okay this is really good i want to read more

and are you sure there was a Nick in the movie? who was he played by? because i cant remebr a nick.

Please update this story. It is really good, I can't wait to read more.

Heyy!

This sounds like it could be interesting!

Update soon!

-surferchamp3

This is so exciting! And even better, it's about Naoko, my fav of the North kids! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update!

Also, not to be rude or anything, but you kinda mispelled a lotta the other kids names. Instead of Joanie, Eli, Lao, JJ, and Nick, you shoulda spelled em Joni, Elly, Lau, Jimi, & Mick. But other that that, really great job. Once again, please update!

that was really good cant wait to read the second chapter

oh my gosh!i love it whats happens next?