Okay, this was loaded with feelings. Really. And, it was absolutely, completely, totally, utterly amazing! Mostly the over-all feeling. And the ending. Can't forget the ending, now can I? If I could choose, it would probably end up in the top-five favorites of mine. Not that there's something like that, but, if I could choose.
It was awesome. Really.

Love,
Pathetic

This is awesome. This is a great one-shot. Very cute and inspiring message. :)

wow, that was really great. you're a great writer! i love one-shots that have a bit of feeling to them

a cute read, a wonderful fic.
yayy for fluffy akuroku, boy does it make my day or what? :D

I cried. I freaking cried!! I neer cry and this little story made me cry! You're amazing and I'm seriously starting to follow all your stories now. AkuRoku forever!

Wow... Now that was beautiful! As soon as I read the summary I just knew I had to read this fic. Quite a hook you got there.

Anyways, I think I love this story. I don't know really know why though. Maybe because the way it's written sounds like poetry, or the plot is original and adorable. Or maybe it's just because of the relationship between Roxas and Axel. Axel photographing Roxas is adorable!! Actually, I think I like this story for all of those reasons.

Please keep writing, you're a gorgeous author!

this is great... i envy your skills as a writer, able to convey this emotion and then repenting from it in a way that is believeable.
sheesh, i should just add you to my alerts. i'm missing all this great stuff haha

aw the ending was sweet!

oh my gosh, i LOVED it.

im so glad i got the 100th review :)

now, just the story itself - that randomness of how they met was rather fun; its not often that you actually end up with some kid that you took a picture of on a bus ride. i also liked how you put a very real problem in there, and then the way you had it diverted. very cool. and roxas had some little quirks that were fun to read, "shoot me".

i especially loved the word use. i didnt really expect you to use all of them, 'cause of the oddity that they are, but im extremely glad that you did. my favorite was metanoia. that sentence just had so much meaning in it! it summarized entire fic.

I luurves it! So beautiful and a definite favourite
Great work! xD

oh my gosh!
that was so beautiful!
LOL i thought he meant shoot him with a gun too XDD
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The Bridge was quite possibly one of the most depressing things I've seen in a long time.

... but this was perfect. The fear of losing someone he'd just met was touching, and Roxas giving into Axel made me smile.

this is one of the best pieces I've read in a good while.

LOL
The ad beneath is your story right now has a photographer xD

:D
Good job Axy. :)

awesome! i sort was thinking that roxas was suicidal before he jumped, said. god thing axel was there to convince him to stay. and when he said "shoot me" i knew he didnt mean it literally. thenks for the ficQ!Q

Oh, girl, you have no idea how much that one touched me. It was so full of emotion that I couldnt help but react along with it. I laughed, I cried, I felt fear and soaring hope. It was beautiful and masterfully done.