Yay Rikamon and Takatomon are finally together!

Whoa... that is some serious emotional depth. Im sad to find out that you can relate to such things. Atleast Ruki and Takato get to be happy in the end... right? BTW: carrot top is my most hated nickname.

RuKato Eternal!

So Says Issac

I know the feeling, a friend of mine commit suicide three years ago, it felt awful...

I liked the fic, was lovely, I almost cry too...

good fic... it really did make me feel... :D

and you're A/N...
yeah... you have a point... it hurts and it shouldn't happen..
Adios for now though...
and good fics...
Good luck with life...:D

omg...i have this idea in my head but it wont come out...damnit it goes something like this "somewhat this story...takato finds his destiny blah blah blah,takato goes to digi world and says good bye,takato goes to the digi world for 5 years or so...blah blah blah,he comes back blah blah blah,he has a cool cloak yada yada ruki and the gang meet up with him blah blah blah,new evil blah blah blah, big conspearic(see now when i say i cant spell i really mean it, i mean i cant spell to save my life),they win blah blah blah,goes time skip like 7 years into the future and they are like 20 or something..weddins bah blah end...lol yes its out...lol...such a basic idea but typin it got it out of my head yay now to read some more stuff and see what other ideas i can make up..this is a crappy idea for a story and i do sell myself short but eh..my school doesnt allow me to use my imagination to write a story..they assign them and stuff...use this story idea if u want i dont care...but good story...holy...im freakin random 2day...i should not eat cookies while readin this..inner me:but i like cookies...lol...COOKIES!

cookies are the only thing that makes me hyper like hell and makes my mind think fast and things and i can solve questions faster than usual...wow this took me 2 minutes to type omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper hyper
HYPER !"takes deep breath and faints from use of all hyperness-es-ses-ba

Man..err girl, do you have any BAD stories? There all so good! You got amazing talent... gee, I wish I could write like that! (My drawing's better than my writing.) Keep up your good work!

Get a new sequel for this story it's kinda good.

ok you piece of shit lissen to me and lissen closely!(dont care about my fucking spelling) ok fisrt DONT FUCK AROUND WITH OTHER PEOPLES SHIT! (meaning u brianless dult that you shouldnt RAT on people cuz trust me i will BRING YOU DOWN!) i know what you have been doing!(telling the people about other peoples lemons ! my god are you THAT INOCENT AND AFRIAD!) fuck kid get a life and GROW UP! well if that didnt go through you little brian then you truley r hopeless and yes i pulled (o-what-is-it? an Angel-Chan!) i RATED on you! HAHAH you may not think it but there is shit that is not aloud on here that you have done (not saying its just this story!) and you will be geting reviews like this from more then me (BE SURE OF THAT!) AND MORE THEN 1! so BITCH at ya soon (if your acount still exists! c yas jackass

Wow.

0_o
That was so good! The images of a crying rika, of the mirror, are so vivid! Also, i love your choice of words. Keep 'em coming!

Wow...I have to say that I myself actually thought about death...some thoughts focused on suicide...but I know that I couldnt do it...i guess thats a good thing...Great story and hope that ur friend gets better if not that she is already!

One more thing
I am having family problems right now too. Eervy single fight my mom and dad has makes me feel like it's one step closer to divorce. My dad even talked to me about it and said "We aren't going to have a divorce right now but you never know. I just wanted you to understand" Of course I don't understand. I only pretended to. I never told anybody else about this but I feel right now is the time. My mom and dad would even sometimes ask if they had a divorce which parent would I go to? Of course I was seven then so I didn't really think of the seriousness. Right now they're still together but sometimes they'll ask that and my answer was still the same "I don't know." I always tried anything to not hear their fights. I turned on my CD Player as loud as I could but I dimly could still hear. I'm still a preteen and I found out divorce is the hardest on kid's my age. I understand why Rika used to be so cruel. I would feel that way too but usually hide it as always. But now I figured I shouldn't hide it. I'm going to speak to it to somebody and that somebody is my best friend who lives on the othe side of town. She probably would be shocked that I even feel this way but she is understanding. Your friend should know it does hurt. A lot. I know what's she's going through cause I'm going through it myself. But whatever she does DON'T let her kill herself. She has too much to live up to. I have only this too say. I wish I could talk to your friend in person but I can't so this is the only way I can communacate with her. Tell her I say "Hi" and to tell her I'm going over the same thing.

Great story. I loved it. I even cried silently as I felt Rika's alon with Takato's pain. You're a great writer. No, better than great.
Also on another note, yes I did think about death but never tried commiting suicides. I'm glad they got back together. RUKATO FOREVER.

Why would one ask for help and not answer when someone replied?

She should know the answer to that. too bad she won't admit it."Don't cry! Crying for something that's already happened will only make you weaker and weaker until you have nothing left! You must be strong, or you'll lose more of the people close to you!
What right does he have to dictate things to a child so small?

Perhaps he'd done this to me...
whose him? You cannot hide anything from 's hidden from herself most of her life.

and if anybody's anyone, then I'm you!
was that sopposed to not make sense?"What's the matter, Rika? I'm you, aren't I?"That's right- if you hate me, then you hate yourself as well."I agree. And like you, I love Takato, I want to be with him, but I also wish to be left alone."Solitude. That's the main thing I need to be strong."Yes, and I must free myself of all emotions, for they are weak.
You really need to add some tone of voice here. It's a commen mistake by fanfiction authors.

Tears are unneeded! Stop!
Tears are part of what make us human.

not because it had told me otherwise.

that implies it told her to, but it told her not to.

Oh, why wouldn't it leave me alone?
Because she needs to face herself before she can face the world.

kick the shards away from me.

I didn't get the idea they were that close."Mm."Mom.
been acting like a lunatic.

I think Rika is losing her touch with reaity.

I had to find a way to release this darkness from my heart!
Admit to yourself you're human.

And once she's gone, it's off! She's still herself after everything, you have to admire that.

his dad was a little on the weird side...
all parents are like that

Hey was exspecting Jeri to be comforting Takato, (REALLY hurting Rika at that point
pain that I had caused. It' s been her stock in trade for most of her life.

a thick of pride.

a thicket of pride. you never know.

That's how hope works.

Because that same scene had gone through me almost every day of my life.
She only met him a year or two ago.

He laughed. Who?

I'm unsure if that's where she tried, but...
You can't control the actions of others.

afro

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Death only leads to more death.

Only wish others would realize that.

I think the spoken dioluge was a little bit melodrama, bu not enough to ruin the emotion you've put ino this. Rika is finnaly forced to confront the fact she's a human being, and love is so basic a need for human beings we never once consider it a really our entire lives.
This isn't fanfiction, this is art.

Gosh, that was great! Everything, every little bit seemed to mesh together into something more than the average Fic. I hope there will be more Rukato stories to come.)

first off, great story and RUKATO FOREVER, but now to the sad stuff. I too know very well the effects of suicide as two of my friends killed themselves last year. Suicide is the never the ending of pain but the begining of more pain.