Hello,

I am curious as to why, if your story is complete you do not list it as so via the uploader tool. If you did it would be easily found by all those whom are only looking to read finished or completed works. It would most likely increase you readership numbers as well. Just thought I'd ask. Great work!

This is where you truly messed up with this story, along with a lot of other things you inserted yourself into the story, that's like the biggest "no no" of Fanfiction. Also you made him a seer for no reason, plus you him extremely powerful with only a little bit of training. 3-4 months (I think) of training is nowhere near enough for someone to get to be as powerful as Merlin. While I really like your other stories this one just doesn't do anything really for me.

Love it so far!

i love this story its awesome

voyons la suite.

Can anyone say "shameless self insert
just teasing, love it so far.

For the record.. I absolutely loved your other story and its sequel and can't wait for the next update but this one...
What happened to Harry's and Sirius' relationship?
Where in the world did Harry who for the most part is a mediocre student at best except in Defense and charms become uber everything without any kind of explanation as to why it happened.

How and why was Sirius so unaffected by Azkaban? honestly even in canon he's not quite right.

And if Sirius was married why did his wife not try to take up his responsiblities like being the godmother figure especially if she's do damn powerful.

There's a lot of mary sue in this and no one is really in character.

Can you please put this story as completed. I would have found it way earlier if you did. Same with the sequel BUNNY

Isn't a bit hypocritical for them to have pranked the whole of Slytherin House multiple times then say, "Not all Slytherins are bad!" I mean really, with the stigma they all have, no wonder they turn out evil! x x
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BUNNY

thank you for your story.. i do enjoy them very much.. after reading changes in the time of war and its sequels...this one seems a bit over the top with the powers and such .. I do like the way you wrote the other better i think.. probably do to experience and time.. regardless on i go to the next story. world of war. thanks.

wow,, good job!

Why did you make Sirius the Phoenix? It should have been Harry. It doesn't make any sense. You turned Sirius and Harry relationship to nothing. Then you made Sirius' magical powers equal with Dumbledore, even made him able to make Voldie run away. It's just not making any logic. Then Harry got many powers without any reasons.

I thought that there were only supposed to be two prefects for each house..The writing also seems rushed, and everyone seems kinda OC-ish

ok ive read your other stories and thier all good but really. Arther Weasely?

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!