Omg what an jerkward lol. Well Alice was right about Edward down to the tee...I hope Rose is right too ;). Poor Bella, I really hope she doesn't dwell on him being such an Ass.

Why didn't Edward go for it? I knew it couldn't be that easy. This story is amazing! I can't wait to read more.

Alice is truly the best! I love how Alice gets what she wants :). I can't wait to read how Bella meets Edward.

I love Rose already :)

jezuz mary & joseph! You don't just write angst; you write fuckin' HEARTBREAK! My heartbreak! erggghhh! I can't believe he fucked some girl in a BATHROOM for god's sake.

one note for reference which you've probably figured out: a vegan eats nothing produced by an animal: no meat, dairy or honey. Vegetarian will eat dairy & honey.

hmmmm...does Edward have a Kinkward hiding inside?

mmmmm...edward donut...what's inside? ;)

omg...I absolutely loved your story...so well written...I especially loved the way it played with my emotions...laughter, sadness, worry, love, hate (for Edward when he temporarily left her)...you did an amazing job, I have to say that this is by far one of my favs :)

Great story, thanks for sharing :)

Alexa

love it

YAYZ FOR HAPPEH ENDIN'S!

A very very excellent story, ABG...I can't believe it's your first! This goes into my Favorites fo'sho'.

(Dang, with all the work i've had to get done, i'm surprised I finally finished reading at all.)

I see we found out what happened with Tanya. Mike Newton, lol. Again, I guess Bella's a better person than me, because, even though I could be all "great Tanya, your re-habbed and changed your ways", I seriously doubt I could be her friend to any signifigant degree.

As for Edward...I've never seen a fellow who enjoys dessert quite as much, often, or thoroughly as he.

;)

*sigh* why does Carlisle have to be so frickin' hot? I guess Esme deserves that for being such a nice person..

I've never really had the yen to visit Niagra Falls until now...lol, but something tells me my own experience would be quite different from Bella's.

My favorite part:

"Christ he could be bald, wearing a barrel attached to a pair of suspenders and I'd still hit.

From all sides.

Repeatedly." - Mmhmm, dats right girl...do whatcha gotta do.

Okay, now you're losing me. Anytime we talk tattooing I turn off. I know there's lots of nice people that have or love tatts, but I fucking DESPISE them. The only thing I hate worse are facial piercings.

I can understand her wanting to be rid of the burn mark, but that's what LASERS are for, Bella. I can just see her applying for a respectable job at one of the places Edward mentioned, with a nasty tatt on her hand for the world to see.

And marking up any of Edward's beautiful, perfect flesh is just a crime!

Ok, psycho ranting over.

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The bathroom sexin' was MEGA hot!

The verbal thrashing she gave the redhead was beyond priceless.

Crossing my fingers that all will be well for these two.

Love Alice. Adore Rosalie.

Fave lines (LOL!):

"Shlooper flooper flibber floo? KINKWARD GIVE BELLA BRAIN FAIL."

"BELLA HAVE TEH DUMB."