so good! love serenate so much, seriously the best couple on gossip girl. you should write another one of these for the rest of season 5, it was uncanny how the season you write this on is the season of actual serenate on gg(:

I love this Serenate story You are an amazing writer I hope you continue to write more amazing fics)

I loved this fic, you're a wonderful writer!
Ohh and I wish you write more of a old fic called "Orange Sky" that was my first Serenate's fic, and I loved it sooooo much, make me addicted. Then it will mean the word to me if you complete.
Thanks for your time.

XOXO

I know my review's WAY late, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE every chapter of this story. It's seriously the best multi-chapter NS fic I've ever read.

i just read this all over again and i forgot how much i love it!

it's so good! you're such an amazing writer i love all your stories!)

Wow,This story is one of AMAZING NS fiction I've 's one of my favourite
I love this fic so much.I adore you the way you wrote NS-it's the way I really want them to be and this is why I love them-You wrote in absolute perfectly.

I read it so many times!
Thanks for write this awesome fic.I really enjoyed it and you make me love NS more 3

Not a Goosip Girl fan. But I love how you write. Keep it up.)

That was absolutely fantastic! I loved each and every chapter of this story. Congrats, really, it was un-freaking-believable. Needless to say I'll be adding this to my favorites and the Nate Serena, Serena Nate community.
Have a wonderful day!-Dazzle.

oh, i LOVED this. so, so much. i was so sure that serena was pregnant in that chapter she was acting so bitchy, and i would have loved it if that if it had gone in that direction. i loved the direction you did go though, obviously. the bunny! too cute! write more NS! (maybe a pregnancy story? pretty please?)

Not entirely qualified to review this story, as I've never read the books and followed the show only casually (to say the best)until very recently. But here is in my 2c nonetheless.

This piece worked for me, primarily because the characterization of Nate. From what I can gather, in the books Nate is a well-meaning guy who just wants to coast through life. With the limited screen time Nate has had on the show, no one could get into his headspace and hence he is assumed to be flighty, especially in the relationship area. But this piece here imbues Nate with a quiet determination which is very refreshing to see.

This Nate possesses an almost unwavering dare I say it fortitude to pursue a goal once he sets his sight on it, and he does it in a way that is not entirely out of character. In S2, he showed he was willing to fight for Blair's affection once he decided he wanted her however misguided he was in that decision and he showed he could be a perfect gentleman, a good friend, when Blair was pining for what she thought she had lost with Chuck. So, the way he dealt with Serene's affection for/infatuation with Carter in this piece is touching, yet believable.
This is exactly how I'd like to see Nate done in building up to NS on the show, but frankly I'm not holding my breath. The show writers seem to have such a fixation on Dan the amount of screen time they give Dan sometimes makes me wonder if they are living vicariously through him.

But I digress. I kind of LOL at that little dig at Dan something about "soul mate and recognize the description of him being so in-character. Although I think the writers are ridiculous to devote screen time to Dan's insignificant adventure as of late, overall I don't hate Dan the character does that even make any sense? I just think DS, as shown in S1, was toxic for Serena.

I have mixed feelings towards Blair. On the one hand, the SB scenes in this piece are all so beautifully drawn that it makes me all warm fuzzy inside. On the other, I wish she was more bitchy; like giving Nate a hard time, even though she is all ok with NS, just because she is a girl he is a guy and we girls’ purpose in life is to torture the guys? Hee! Consequently, my favorite Blair scene is this one in Chapter 5 (3x05 The Gift of You“I need a moment with my BFF, C.,” she tells Carter snippily, waiting impatiently for him to move. “Go play with the boys,” she says dismissively, and settles in next to Serena.
Pure gold!

But this could be because I struggle against Carter a little bit. I am predisposed to dislike him from watching the show and hence a little annoyed at Serena’s vacillation between him and Nate. One rationalization could be that Serene wants to latch onto any connection to her father, but I like the explanation in this piece better he is the barrier Serena puts up against risking her heart. Makes far more sense in this narrative.

Hope you don't mind the babbling. In closing, I'd like to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, and hope to see more from you.

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oh, gosh.. i got all tingly in my stomach reading the ending with the picture. I swear to you.. i will have loads of favourite chapters after this one, but right now, I'm absolutely adoring this one!

Loove)

/And it’s not like we’ll be sharing a bed,” she jokes, and then hurriedly, adds, “And it’s not like it would matter if we were. Because we’re not…” She trails off and smiles breathily. LOL!

The ending was perfectly simple. I loved this chapter!

Oh, yees! Juicy, juicy so much possibilites that will arise if she does move in. And I'm assuming she will :D

wee!

I adore this because of the realism of the situations. Some fanfics can seem really.. er, out-there (OOC) or fast (jumping too quickly into the heart of the plot) but I'm glad you stuck to their personalities. I can really see this, as if it were playing out in my head.(Honestly, I've only started to become a SereNate fan due to the latest episode that has come out"The Last Days of Disco Stick and now I'm obsessed! haha
I've been looking around for some nice fanfics of them and FINALLY, I come across yours! I'm looking very forward to the next chapters (since I do need a source to fuel my wishful fantasies of them and to distract me from the two-week-long wait.
. . oh, c'mon CW!
haha, rant over.
Summary: I love the way you wrote and described this chapter! And I can't wait to read more of this story :D