I really like this...you did the accent perfectly. Wonderful ending!

I feel horrible. I mean, I don't have much to say except that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I don't even know much about the series but I still liked reading it (you have a knack for that, doncha? ;D). Like I've said, there isn't much to say...I feel for Melodia, poor thing. Anyway, keep up the awesome work dude!

AWESOME. Honestly, I had totally forgotten about Melodia and her crush on Yang, and this fic... just made me love them. I mean, I still prefer YangxLena, but dang it, MelodiaxYang is just... sweet. As you've demonstrated.

I really have no criticism. Even the accent, which you would think would get annoying after a while, didn't bother me- it only helped the story in the long-run, actually. You could hear Melodia's voice as you read.

*Instantly faves*

GAH! YANG AND LENA MARRY!? NO!
...But it's a nice story. I like how you wrote it from Melodia's point of view. And the accent fits her! XD