good fic...there are parts i really enjoyed on this. not enough father son bonding hehehe

Now *that* was quite the character study. This, from Rufus's perspective, was really nice. To see how much of him he does and doesn't recognize as part of his father's influence, how he uses ambition as a sort of rebellion, not to mention the *guns*. It makes sense that the son of corporation that draws more than a few of its profits from war would know a thing or two about how to shoot, but the level of detail that you've put in this, the interesting juncture between theory and practice that Rufus finds himself hitting as a result--well, they just about made this for me. Thanks for writing this!

Wow, the last sentence was just...Perfect. (as your fic' :P )
Thank you! ^_^

That was extremely well-written, and I mean that with every ounce of praise possible. I really enjoyed reading this. Your style made it flow so nicely.
I think that the choice of 2nd person was an interesting one, but not bad at all. It kept the story engaging and allowed more insight. I liked it.
Excellent, excellent job.

Oh, this was so well written, just like all of your fics are. I especially enjoyed the last line.

There are several things I discovered from reading this fic. First of all, learning to shoot is not as easy as every RPG game out there wants us to believe. Secondly, Rufus was a very, very smart and determined boy from the beginning. And finally - your writing still kicks ass. I really liked the main plot and the underlying struggle for power.