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Rinoax
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
Love it...so much hahahaha!

m about Roy's acctions and Riza actions...I just don't know, maybe they just... feel in love withouth noticing and there they are doing what they are doing...I don't get why he can't drink her blood, but I have some ideas. xD

Who are those people looking? perverts!
Chelee!
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
Great chapter. Love how you played with her mind: first her body betrays her reason, then her feelings, then her reason crumbles. I'm intrigued about the 2 people's identity, maybe unknown characters so far? I'm just really blown away; intense chapter... kudos!
aquamarine-acaia
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
uh oh rizas introuble...
The Misty Forest
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
Wow.. the thought that they will go to that event that quickly didn't even pass my mind..
It's still nice anyway. And who's that two people spying D:
Update soon :)
JingYee
2009-11-11 . chapter 7
I can't wait for the next chapter! who are the two other people?! >_<
Lyny Angell
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
I'm... intrigued. I still don't like the idea of Roy being a vampire... and frankly, so far, he's being a complete ass in this fic... but I'm still intrigued. lol. This story is another example of Roy and Riza both being out of characer... and yet strangely in character at the same time. I'm not sure how that works, but you do it well, so keep it up!
Love
Lyny
Kick-It-Aus Style-Mal's
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
*DIES*

OMG THAT WAS just #@)$#)$#_$() suger awsome. My thoughts hmm well i can picture a vampire Roy being like that,but them I'm strange so XD

That was more awesome then my coke!! IT WAS EPIC SUGANINJA!

Crawls,and sits on your head "Update soono"
RebbieChan
2009-11-01 . chapter 6
I think some of the descriptions got a bit too fluffy. It seems somewhat like (and i bet everyone who writes a vampire fic is tired of hearing this) your going to pull a twilight. I really hope it doesn't come to that but obviously there's a lot more to go in the story and it can't be decided this soon. I can't wait for the next chap, Riza'a reaction is sure to be interesting.
rinxxxav
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
This keeps getting better.Please update soon.
Kilala-kun
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
Keep da chaps coming! & DONT AS LONG!
Crazy2696
2009-10-29 . chapter 6
Ah. keep going. NOW! ha ha. I like it.
Dragonridingattorney43
2009-10-28 . chapter 6
Pretty nice. I never got an alert for this...strange. Awesome job and update soon!
KaguraTheWindGypsy
2009-10-28 . chapter 6
just gootaa keep me waiting. pisses me off... lol OH GOD HURRY UP & FINISH THE DAMN STORY!! i'm dying! though i quite enjoyed reading about roy being so blood thirsty. this is a good chapter. ^_^
WildSilence023
2009-10-26 . chapter 6
If my brain didn't automatically scream, "BREATHE, WOMAN! BREATHE!" I would've died due to the cliffy. Lol. :))

Waiting for next update~! XD
Lanny9000990009
2009-10-25 . chapter 6
Normally, there are parts of the dialoge I skip or skim. But This chapter was PERFECT !! Why oh WHY did you leave us with a cliffhanger ?? Sigh... You are so evil :( I hope you'll update again soon !!
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