*Poke*

Well?

*Pokes again*

a little confusing cause I had to remind myself what everything was but otherwise it was rather enjoyable and I look forword to the next one^^

“Alright, the next person to give a one word sentence gets smacked!” Lorenzo bellows, infuriated at the confusion.

hahaha... I can't stop even smiling at that... XD

Heh, nice. Then again, being a co-author means there weren't really any surprises. Strange thing is...once I read over it, I found a few spelling mistakes that were my fault, but oh well...what are re-updates for?

(laughs) I'm ready at any time for the next chapter, so send it on over whenever you find time.

Later dude!
~DB

Dammit, late again.

Well... not too much to say at the moment, other than "good start."

It looks to be promising. I'll be keeping an eye out.

a good begining to what I am sure is gunna be a excellent story and will live up to trigger in more ways then one i'm sure

I do also apoligaze for not reviewing on trigger but I can be forgetful at times so i'm sorry

I don't think there was anything wrong with grammer or anything I think its all good, not a bad idea with the swords I liked them, wonder whats next gunna have to wait and see I guess *Chuckles*

... Do I have to say something intelligible?

Hey hey hey! I thought we were going to work on this together, and here you go uploading the prologue without letting me look it over. (crosses his arms and glares) Don't let it happen again Cy, I'm serious here.

(expression softens into a proud smile) Apart from that detail, great start to the story. Not that many mistakes, and a pleasant, Cyphrus Cross style start. Like I said though, next time let me help, alright?

Later!

~DB

This is pretty good so far. Continue soon and keep writing.

Check out my story when you get the chance.