Personally, I don't think Kyo should act so troll - ish, but more of a "I only work for money" style like volke.
If Ranulf isn't that much younger than Tibarn, his love with Mihara is sort of...random...

I like this story a lot so far! I just have to tell you something really important. After replaying Path of radiance and enjoying the support conversations, I decided to look them up online. I began reading all of them some guy kindly posted and I found a surprising one.
It was a convo about laguz X beorc etc relationships but it mentioned that it's impossible for the laguz tribes to interbreed meaning a cat and bird...can't have kids. T_T
That is why it is a sad pairing, because I've always thought Ranulf would be a great dad with his humor and such.
I'm sorry I had to tell you this, maybe you can find a way to fit this in somewhere and see what you can do to alter/work with it. Of course that is entirely up to you, you are the author after all. :)

Well written, everyone is in character. Epic story! Keep up the good work.

Ooooh I can't wait to see! If you have any Ideas for Sylvia, I'd love to talk with you about them! C:

You probably don't remember me, but I certainly remember you. This was the first Fire Emblem fanfiction I'd ever grown attached to, and that place won't ever be stolen from you, Sylph.

Though, I can't say I haven't grown out of reading fanfics as a whole, so I can't say anything about your fic, sadly... but, I did read most of it and your writing is refreshing like always, how I remember it used to be. I used to sit and wait for your updates like a good child should. It was the best thing ever.

But, that's besides the point I'm reviewing, even though rules say you must review about the story, and this probably belongs in a PM, but... I wanted to come back and review the first FE story I'd ever written and I'd grown attached to as a anniversary sort of thing for the newest Fire Emblem.

Have you heard of it? Yes. The date is 6-19-2012. Have you heard of the new Fire Emblem? If it brought me back from my late FE ages, maybe it can to others, to...and that's why I'm reviewing.

By the way, I don't really remember, but my old Usernames were...er, Iline is probably one you've heard of.

Anyway, not sure you come to this site anymore, since God knows I haven't, but I want to spread the Fire Emblem love.

Nice with your fanfiction. Your dedication lasts years, it seems. I for one, am a very bad procastinator...

Awww

Now I know I like no love this it's deffintlu not a Mary sue story I look foreword to reading the rest

FFFFF it's been so long since I've last reviewed OR caught up with this story! (this is xTwilightxSpiritX btw, changed my penname haha)

"Before the battle" chapters are usually hard, but I think you executed it so well. You've got a great mixture between drama, humor and general friendship stuff goin on. For a second, I saw you hinting towards IkexSylvia. haha .. or maybe that was just me. IDK. pff. It made me giggle either way. I also love the developement between Irea and Shoen.

Parties with alcohol ELOHEL. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm glad I was able to catch up with this story, it truly is one of my favorites. Keep it up! :)

I just got mind crushed by Tibarn... and Vader... owie...

why ashera why did you have to go and take control of sanaki? (and i just know that because I OWN SOME OF FIRE EMBLEM! but i won't tell how or how much)

that character is lehran. you get him in normal and hard mode by having ike and the black knight fight, but no one die, in the chapter in part three where you play as the greil mercs against the dawn bridgade (as it is). you only get him in the final level of the game.

if you beat the game did you get lehran (i think thats how you spell his name)? you know from lehran's madallion.

well that was unique. and i am a soren fan but still i believe that tibarn SHOULD punch him into the ground, might build up some muscel (or however you spell that)

i think you got the idea for that from star wars. well the 'i am your father' part any way

Yay, I finished reading, after like 5 days of staying up til midnight on my DSi... Anyways, I noticed you called Sylvia a 'lightning mage', and I believe the correct class you want to use is 'thunder mage'. lightning can mean, in a fire emblem context, the flash before thunder, of light, as there is a 'lightning' tome that is used in the GBA FE games. When I first read that, I was very confused-Did she use light magic, or thunder magic. Once Sylvia started practicing thunder magic, I figured out that you must've meant 'thunder mage'.

All in all, this is a great story, with a few grammatical errors (Curse my grammar nazi self...) here and there.

Can't wait for the next chappy! D

Woohoo! Man, forgot about this story/novel!

Still loving it, even if I did need to read the last two chapters to remember what was happening.

Kieran was so in character I lul'd, and that doesn't happen much because I am a humourless troll.

When Kyo came in, I was all like, "WHAT A TWIST!" Very exciting!

It didn't happen this way, but Mihara and Leanne talking, all like. "I am not pregnant. YOU are pregnant." Was funny in my head.

And lastly, one bad thing. Having your best friend join you in your quest as comedoc relief is great! SO DON'T GIVE HER A TRAGIC PAST! It adds Mary-Sue points to who we rely on for charm and wit. This makes her seem out of character even if it is plausible for her life to be like that.

Still, excellent chappie, and I'll e waiting with bated breath for 10 months until you post again xD