Hello.

First, before I begin my review, I would like to agree with the views expressed in your story. I strongly agree that Fuji is greater than Tezuka, and as proven by a number of scientific tests this theory has recently been proved to be true. So, thank you for keeping the information in your fan-fiction correct; I really appreciate it!

I think that this story was quite good, and while there were a few flaws, I think they can be overlooked. For one, Fuji is actually one million, four thousand, one hundred and thirty six times better than Tezuka, but I think that one million is a close enough estimate so I don't mind your mistake. I would also like to point out that if Fuji did indeed have the Midas Touch (this fact has not been proved to be true or false yet) then the possibility that he would turn both of Tezuka's legs to gold is quite slim, and if he did end up turning them to gold then it would take a very large box to hold Tezuka in, especially because of Tezuka's athletic physique. It would also be incorrect to say that Fuji sent Tezuka to Silent Hill, which is in a different universe but is also a made-up place so therefore Tezuka could not actually visit it. If Pyramid Head did exist, though, and was living with Tezuka, it would be impossible for Pyramid Head to rape Tezuka because of his golden legs. Next time please try to be a bit more factual, but for your first try I don't think that it is too bad. The fantastical situations expressed in this fanfiction are actually very amusing, so therefore it is not too much of a problem.

I really liked how you used more than one reason to persuade the viewer of your opinion, as this helped strenghten your point. I also like the illustriative writing. I could almost imagine the play-dough sculptures as you were describing them, for example. I also thought that you stayed very true to the characters, and all of the characters acted exactly as I would have imagined them to in the Televison series. For this I commend you deeply.

All in all, I actually really enjoyed your fanfiction, and I do hope that you will write more. To end my review, I will quote one of the most admired men of our time, with a quote that I think perfectly sums up my opinion about your story"If your fanfiction were a McDonalds burger, it would be the McGorgeous. Aristotle

Thank you, and I hope you have a wonderful day.

LOL so funny ! fuji and oishi also the part about silent hill! wanna see more! its short but great, nice job on this one!

Lol. Fuji is better than Tezuka. xD

It was epic. I personally prefer Fuji and that was awesome.

Hilarious.

But Oishi as a princess is very disturbing;

ILU

plz let me bear your children'D

TEZUKA IS THE SEX.

BUT THIS WAS AMAZING.

LOVE YOU.

WE SHOULD COLLAB.

Y/N?