Very nice, most angel sanctuary fics lack good writing. I like it alot, ::smiles:: I hope perhaps you'll write more like this. Short but nice, It made up for the shortness.
Well, I'll be going then
Ja ne~
- Myself

wow, that was really good [unlike most AS fics]. though, my favorite pairing is LuciferxMika. but still really good. you should write more AS fics.

I really like this! You should write more AS fics. Keep up the good work ^_^

Crisp, clean, and perfectly in character; your Raph and the touch of the cigarettes to encapsulate their relationship are particularly wonderful. I [heart] it!

Mm. I enjoyed this. Then again, it's hard not to please me with a story about Michael and Raphael. However, the tense switches took away from the story. I'm not sure if you were experimenting or just not bothered by it, but I might recommend just sticking with past tense instead of switching to present as well. A beta could probably help you with things like that.

...damn, you're good. I love the use of the present tense: makes it at the same time almost dreamlike - because present is so unusual, perhaps? - as well as somehow /tangible/, especially with the early paragraphs' description. And the way you've handled the speech, somewhere between direct and indirect, adds to that sense of... ambiguity? The way what Raph's doing in order to heal is technically pretty unpleasant, but becomes something wonderful when Michael watches it. That. Plus, you know, they feel /right/ - a depiction of how Michael is when he's exhausted which /makes sense/.

Eeee, good RaMika! I like this; in some odd way, it seems -- if not Christmassy -- Yuleish; passing of an old year, the death and rebirth of the Sun King, etc, etc. Good fugue on the themes of both rebirth and everything being the same; I like the mystical significance of Raph's new skin. As always, your writing is lovely -- nice and clean, coherent, and very... subdued, while still conjuring up images. I also like the fact that there's /no dialogue at all/ -- you manage to convey a lot with little things, like Raphael insisting Mike light his cigarettes, and give us a sense of their relationship without beating us over the head with it. #include Waaaaiii! Write more plz!!!!! XD XD XD