hey, logged out specially to be able to post this ive just noticed your comment how you havent seen the first terminator movies. well, you should! if youre writing about kyle reese, you HAVE to watch the first part! not because i think youre writing off-canon or anything (see my review!) but because i think youd LOVE the movie where we actually get to meet kyle reese the man. come on, treat yourself! you can find the movie easily on youtube. the thing youll have to search for a little longer is the beautiful love scene with him and sarah its cut from most of the versions out there, damn puritans... id be happy to provide any links, if you need. anyway, keep it up and get us that next chapter!

wow, that was a really, really good intro! to tell you the truth, i was wary of the premise of this story, because i really feel kyle and sarah are destined to be together and i love their story but are writing this really good. and maybe, just maybe, the OC story you are developping wont even change this? *heres hoping
the character presentation, both of the known and the original, are very good. phantom may run the danger of being a mary-sue, but so far her dialogue works great. take care not to make her too perfect and you should be alright. kyle is great here, youve handled him very well, i feel. the sex discussion could have easily gone overboard or have been too cliché, but in fact it was both funny and touching, and not too much. its a good move to make phantom some years older, it helps to make her bounce off of kyles younger self. next chapter, please!

Great Job with the story I hope you will continue to write it!

Hahahaha Phantom is so blunt! You displayed Kyle's awkwardness in that scene perfectly, I was cringing a little bit (in a good way :p). I'm really interested to see what happens next with them, and you got me a little scared at the end when those Skynet blips were circling the area! :p Update soon, pretty please!)

Aww, it was so sweet:). Nice story. I like it. Phantom's a pretty interesting character (I love the ski mask!) and Kyle's so cute. Good luck with writing!

hey this is pretty good.
update soon

Hmm. I like this very much so far. It reminds me of my own Resistance fighter, Irene Ghost from my Terminator fic. I like her a lot, she's got spunk and everything!

Great job. I'll be looking out for this...actually praying for it to come out very soon! :D

I love your story so far, please please keep updating!

Great story so far! I love Kyle's character- he seems so realistic. Phantom is really random- made me laugh. (in a good way
Can't wait till next chapter!