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Aranna Undomiel
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Nice try at writing drabbles, though I think they must be considered more of really short stories or really long drabbles...lol
Loved "on your sleeve", how Dean even with brainproblems doesn't break a promise to his little brother. That's what you call devotion.
And the Sam being sick and Dean coming to take care of him was just downright cute ;D

Please continue trying your hand at drabbles, I'm sure you'll manage to get one under the 100 words someday ;)
Aimed mischief
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
Great fic!! ^_^
Scanilla
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
I feel like I'm repeating myself here but what can I say when you're so good? Well thought. I love the way you always plan everything carefully and have themes in these things etc. And I loved how Dean's words to Sam harked back to Sam's words to Dean. Great stuff!
Twinchy
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Yeah, I bet Sammy impressed the professor very much with his challenge - followers with blind faith in every word are easy to find on any campus but people who use their heads to actually thinkt things through are rare.

I was really happy to see that big brother Dean was there for Sam, even when he fell sick at Stanford. I agree with the older Winchester on all but getting a heart attack from the emergency phone call. John and Dean must have been worried to no end then.

As always, well written, Mirror. Dean's getting injured this severely right before Sam wanted to leave for college was so sad.
TheKritty
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Oh, I SO liked that one! Really, great little story! Thanks for it!
Kritty
Stoneage Woman
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
I loved this. Particularly the Sherwood part. And the ending was great. You haven't lost your touch at all, whether it's LOTR or SN!
sunnyjunedays
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
Hi, Great, loved reading these, you write the characters so well. Loved them, thanks. x
PhoenixDragonDreamer
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
GOD, I love you...

*Sobs*

*Clings to you*

Mandy
PADavis
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
I did love all of these - they are beautifully written.

Phoebe
staceycj
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
awesome as always!
Maz101
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
You are such good value - three drabbles - all good!

Particularly liked the second one for the line about "He wept because if his dad left, he couldn't." which I think beautifully sums up the desperation of a teenager needing to break away. Oh, and the repetition of promises was also very effective and adds to the characterisation.

Nicely done!
Merisha
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
OMG that was awesome. Beautiful and intensely heart breaking!
Especially when Sammy leaves for Stanford.
Wonderful stuff as always
Hugs and luv
Mish :D
mshobgoblin
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
An interesting fic. Nicely put together.
Enjoyed readin it a lot, especially Sam getting his view across to the teacher!
Hob x
apieceofcake
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
Enjoyed, thanks!
Musica Diabolos
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, especially the last one! Very thoughtful, good characterization.
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