Ahh, nice work! I loved it, really.

. . .This is so sad it needs a sequel. Not another chapter! A sequel.
Other than the inherent sadness, I love it :) Poor Cloud.

;_; aw, I started tearing up... D:
ugh...I'm too emotionally moved...-_-"
but this is a really good one-shot. This would make an excellent multi-chap, lots of angst and hopefully a happy ending, because this world needs some happy endings. :]

I love your stories and "moments" :D keep it up!

Poor Leon and Cloud. I look forward to more.

Absolutely stunning!

Oh man~ That was hot! My OTP and some Leon on his own...
Wonderfully written and thyer are all in character! (even if it was only Leon and Cloud... hehe :3) A joy to read!
Keep up the good work!
x Muffin x

I must say, the last two sentences really made this work. It was rather heart-wrenching :( Poor kids need some lovin'.

Love the way you write Leon. I have issues writing for him. Well, both of them, actually. So the fact that you can do it so perfectly really makes me appreciate your work that much more.

Lovely, lovely :D

i love the one-shot but i want it to continue! can u make this multi chappie! i wanna see cloud and leon do each other XD! think of the reviews!

Wonderful!

ohohohohoh. Cloud's a perv ^^ Poor Leon, they should totally hook up so he doesn't have to do it himself anymore. Cloud's a slight bit creepy, until the end which made me smimle in glee. Somewhere deep in my mind, it's telling me that Leon put on a show, although it wouldn't make sense it makes perfect sense! I loved it^^

Oh :( Poor Cloud.

But besides that, Dang man. I'm pretty sure I say the same thing every time I review a story of yours, and it's never anything bad, obviously. Haha. I adore your writing. Not to sound creepy or anything, I just don't know anyone on the planet that writes LeonxCloud better than you.

And this was sad. ;-; I know it's a oneshot and all, but somewhere dep in my mind, It will play out right for him. ^_^ Good work!

Woah. Hawt hawt HAWTNES! Your Leon is one fit Leon and so in charector!
Hmm..even though he is kinda... getting release which...kinda did not happen in the game...
Hmm...
Anyhoos, he was in charector & so very hawt. So very very hawt ~.~

Though am gnna have to imagine there's chapter two where Cloud and Leon end up together. Cos the ending was just so sad :(
I knew CLoud was watching. Hehe. That naughty boy ;D

Loved the flow of this. It was written so well, and it just flowed beautifully.

Wohoo! Loved this ^.^

You know, despite the overall... hotness of that, it was actually kind of sweet. Crazy, I know.

First thought when I finished reading it was: That's really adorable. I feel bad for Cloud though.

D'aww, the end was so sad. :( But very IC, especially for KH2!Cloud, who is a big emoface.

A part of me says this is closer to how OTP would 'really' go, but ... ahh, unrequited Cleons make me baww. So I'm just going to pretend they fuck eventually. Yeah.

-in denial-

Seriously, though. This was awesomee. I enjoy how you write Leon in general, and I seriously love what you did to Cloud here. Even if it does make me go ;n;