Yay! This is cool. Keep going! It's a great idea. I love how you characterised Alicia!

Well, well, well. A nice idea you have here. VP high... Inspired by a certain artbook scan, am I right? Ok, let's get this review started.
The good. Nice characterization of Frei. Alicia is a bit too unsure, but that's okay.
The normal. The author's note at the start is as big as the entire story... Well, this being a first chapter... Yeah. Moving on.
The bad. 'Frei-san'. Stop. Right here and right now. As much as I personally like anime and Japan in general, honorifics don't belong here in any way. VP being a japanese game isn't an excuse. The Norse/European feel of both games doesn't encourage that too.

Waiting for further updates,
N.J.Frost.

So is this story based on that drawing in the artbook where they showed a picture of Silmeria, Alicia, Arngrim, Lezard, Bhrams and Leone in a modern high school setting? XD!!

This is really quite an interesting read...and watch crimeinpartner's walkthrough and commentary on the celestial castle thing on youtube if you are stuck. It helps A LOT. Trust me.

...I'm still stuck trying to beat Loki's children. XD; and Ailyth. ARGH AILYTH.

Anyways, XD I'm waiting for the next chapter here. *goes back to work* =_=' argh work.