I LOVE the black crow from Edgar Allan Poe! I love his work,
And seeing the situation with Shaggy and the crow in my head made me laugh out loud. This already looks goo. Keep up the good work.

~RandomReviewer

Great story! I loved the ending. You're pretty descriptive in your writing and it had a lot of the old fashion Scooby Doo feel to it with the Malt Shop and everything. Keep up the good work ;)

O...this is getting good ;)

Oh no! I hope everything turns out ok...

I can really understand you by ending everything with a mystery. It's like a whole-life cliffhanger :D and writing these IS funny. And makes a bit addicted. Also if reading them can really nerve ...

Anyway, I loved the hints. Thanks. That was really nice.
That story was your best (so far, of course). I hope you'll write more stories and they'll get as good or better as this one. Please, please do it!!

Pia

Ooh, so sweet how he's concerned about her... *sigh*
I like how you always explain things, so your reader (like me!) can understand your story better.

So, that was a wonderful chapter, I loved, I really loved it.
You're great!

Pia

Well, The story is okay--I think it would be better if it had a little more detail. And may I ask where is Scooby? How could Shaggy forget Scooby?? ...hmm... And is this gonna have some Shelma stuff in it?? Ick. (Much rather have him for myself.. hehe ;D )..But anyway, I will be looking forward to see how you end it.

Um... haha, I just realized for the first time, that you wont put Scooby in there. (or do you?)

Also this chapter's very exciting and the cliffhanger you put in here was very good placed. Keep it on (and fast, if you can :D)

Pia

Oh.
I have to say, also if that may sound mean and like I wouldn't like Fred, that I'm glad, that you let Shaggy going on with his search without Fred. Since he's the main character in this story (and my favorite one from Scooby) he should do this alone, and you, like, let him.
Thanks for that.

A-Boh! This mansion is big!

Anyway. Good chapter, and I'm glad, that it's longer than before.

Pia

oh... *nervous-shaking* ... *excited-trembling*

WRite fast, please!

Pia

yeah! I'm number one fan xD

Anyway, this story is so GOOD! I wanna read more of it! So, please, please update as fast as you can.

Pia

p.s.: Little SV in here would be great, but I can understand if you don't want to make it.

i love this! they should make it into a EPISODE

Pretty cool story, hope you will update it soon :)

Oh, that situation os getting worse... poor Shaggy, I mean, what would you think if your best friends are lost and you've got that special feeling like something's wrong...

anyway, this is (in my opinion) your best story yet. Please, keep writing it and fast, if it's possible for you. and, if you're able to, please write a little longer chapters.

Pia

uh, that sounds exciting!!

can't wait to get more of this one, looks like it'll be a good story!
please write more for it soon *begging-puppy-eyes*

Pia