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Hieiko
2009-06-27 . chapter 3
Lovely chapter; evil cliffhanger.

I'm now awfully curious as to the real intent of whoever it was that framed Bond. And if they have the resources to even discover Bond's whereabouts in order to photograph him, why didn't they just kill him right then? Why take the photos and threaten M?
Matteic
2009-06-25 . chapter 3
*ow* the knife part... guh
Bond at Vesper's flat... like it ! And the scene with Felix is good.
It's getting thicker and thicker. Looks like we'll have a good long story to read. Yum.
James - M, of course... Bond asleep, cute ^^ and very good cliffhanger.
ShadowedTaco
2009-06-24 . chapter 3
Amgg! Finally you updated ^.^
Awesome so far.
Sac-a-puce
2009-06-24 . chapter 3
Looking forward to reading more. You have a fascinating trio of POVs to work with...
Matteic
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
You really have a knack to write M. She's so in character, it's perfect ! I love her (wrote two stories with her), I think she's the most interesting character after Bond himself.
It's the fourth time I read the chapter and I'm still laughing at the beginning.
M-Leiter : oh, what wouldn't I give to be a fly on the wall...
(will we see something of this "real file" ?)
ShadowedTaco
2009-06-12 . chapter 2
Loving the story so far.
Hieiko
2009-06-12 . chapter 2
I'm absolutely loving this story. Bond, M, and Felix are all in character, and well, the plot thickens. I still don't understand what's the deal with whoever is behind the frame-up, but it's getting more interesting. I love that M gave Bond enough "leeway" to escape. And that Felix is amused by it.
Hieiko
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that was brilliant. I can really picture James and M's conversation. M was rather frightening at the end there, but then she wouldn't be head of MI6 if she weren't.
oceanclover15
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
That was brilliant. Really enjoyed that, especially the scenes between Bond and M. Hope there's more between these two.
Matteic
2009-06-08 . chapter 1
Wow.
The summary is good and I already had a good pressentiment (sorry if the vocabulary or the grammar sound off, I'm French), only confirmed by the first chapter.
The multiple POV is a very good idea, I loved the way it began with Felix. He's an interesting character.
I loved the description of Bond's flat, and the scene between Bond and M, fabulous ! She knows him well and can't help but like him, like a wayward son.
This time they thought to sedate him - it made me laughs in QoS.
Hope to read you again soon !
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