 Velvet Starlight 2009-07-06 . chapter 1EXCELLENT story! You write really, really, *really* well, and I really hope you continue this, because it's a great idea that would work out brilliantly for these characters. It's just like Elaine said--Jerry's the glue, and it would be great to show how all the three friends cope with it.
This scenario is especially intriguing because it's, well, Seinfeld. Never, ever serious. No sappines, no lessons learned, no emotions and never, ever a serious moment. All four of them force themselves into a constant, unwavering state of nonchalant irreverence because it's the only way they can live, and nothing like this ever happens to ruin their routine. Now that something HAS happened, I'd be very interested in seeing how the characters deal with it without turning into different people. Please tell me you're going to continue this, because it's a great story and this category really needs more stories, especially something other than the pathetic script crap that usually shows up. Please? |