T_T You had me in tears. So good I can't even come up with any criticism. Damn. >.>

Very well written. When I looked at the summary I was thinking that it was just going to be another random Dark Brotherhood Fan Fiction but when I actually read it I discovered that it was absolutely fantastic. Keep up the fantastic work!...do we get to murder Lucien yet?

ooh god yes
thanks for trying to save me from all fans who would like to rip me apart <8'D but i dont mind XD
oh god, this is EXACTLY what i had in mind.. DEHHEEHEHHEEH
perv.
i like pervs.
i like this fic

too bad it ended so sad... but so sweet... so... PERV LELEEL

W...T...F?!?!?!

I shouldnt like it. but I do! rofl

Wow. This was actually very good O.O I didn’t think a pairing like Lucien and Ocheeva could really work, but once again, WOW. When I first read the summary I squealed in pure terror XD I couldn’t keep myself from looking into it though. I’m so glad that I did too, its such a good fic! Even if a bit sad…T-T

I’m still finding this especially creepy (Lucien was like a father to her! D: ) Gah! But its so awesome XD Lucien is such an Argonian horn dog X3

Excellent job!

Quite brilliant, in terms of writing, descriptions, use of language, and characterisations. Y'know, I've always said there weren't enough assassin-lizardsex fics on this site, and- OK, joking, but I actually thought this was going to be a light-hearted parody. I'm not sure I would've believed that it could be done seriously and WELL, but you've pulled it off with remarkable skill. It's good to see the Purification from the POV of the Sanctuary residents for a change, and the steady, ominous build-up of tension and mistrust is superb. Going straight on the Favourites list, this one is.
And I think Crisium set you a worthy challenge there - Adoring Fan/Umaril? DO IT :p

Okay. First off, you could write Adoring Fan/Umaril the Unfeathered slashfic and I would still read it and gape because it would be yours and brilliant.

Secondly- This? This absolutely works. And I had no idea what to expect coming in even though I'd known about the idea, but this is very natural and unexpectedly, very moving. Your characterizations are clear and true, and I don't think I've ever seen Ocheeva written so well. (There is a distinct lack of Ocheeva fic, I think. I think I like her better now, too.) Your Purification was done just absolutely right, and it was horrifying and heartbreaking and GAH, that ending.

If it was a happier story, I might flail, but as it is I'll just add it to my faves and say- well done, and bravo.