Ok, I'm back!!

And jeez...that was sad. That last letter from Jack made me bawl my eyes out. Wow.

Ok, but once again, I think you captured the characters really well, (this is for the last three chapters) And Jack was done really well too; what you wrote about him seemed canon :)

And again, I really REALLY liked this idea, I thought it was very original and really well written. Great job, you made me cry.

~Spirit

Hi,

I just wanted to say how much I loved reading this!

It's nice how you put so much background to people who didnt really have one, and what their thoughts were.

Thanks,

~Fish Finger~

OH. That was sad. I like how you're making a whole plot out of this, with that guy coming with the shoebox and all that.

I think I'll stop here for today, and go watch the movie. Your story has made me want to.

~Spirit.

And here's another one. I liked Bobby's perspective, considering we NEVER saw anything else from him since that one time at their Thanksgiving. It was interesting to see some life in his personality.

I also really liked how he thought that it was Randall his dad was in love with and not Ennis. But how could he know about Ennis?

Also, the drinking was nicely done. He did swear a lot though, not something I'd expect, but it showed how angry he was at everyone for his dad dying. And it is hard to see your parent figure drunk like that, I think you captured that pretty well, how it disgusted him.

Nice job again.

~Spirit.

Ok, here's my second one. I know it's probably a bit disappointing to get so many reviews from only one person, but this story should attract a lot more people than just me.

So anyway, I liked the spin you put on Monroe, how he was actually a bigger jerk than we would have initially thought he was. I really liked how he was bitter, and the touch with Junior asking about him was nice too. That was cool.

And I also liked how you made Jack come in at the end asking for Ennis. Nice touch there.

Ok, onto the next chapter!!

AWESOME so far!

~Spirit

Ok, I'm going to review every chapter, so be ready for a buttload of reviews. I was going to just do the whole thing overall when I was done, but I figured I wouldn't remember what I liked especially about each chapter.

So, here I go.

First of all, I REALLY like this idea that you have, it's really cool and original.

Secondly, for this chapter, I thnk you caught LaShawn's character pretty well, considering we never really saw all that much of her, only that she was a real talker. But, besides that, I think you got her pretty decently. :)

Your idea about her was really new and original as well, I wouldn't have thought about her knowing that Randall was gay and having an affair with Jack at all, nice job there.

Overall, I'm really excited to read the rest of this, because its something that's never been done before, (from what I've seen so far)

So awesome job!!

~Spirit.