| Reviews for Juxtaposition |
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Fire From Above 6/12/09 . chapter 3Nice to see their friendship developing. |
Fire From Above 6/12/09 . chapter 2I like how Harry is handling Tom. |
Fire From Above 6/12/09 . chapter 1I'm interested. Looks like Voldemort made a bad move. |
livvie333 6/12/09 . chapter 4It is the least creative, but that's because people like TR/HP nonslash stories, and there aren't enough of those online. We, the readers, will take what we get. Your story is much more well written than most of the other stories on this website, so we forgive you. My suggestions are longer chapters and more details. You're really rushing through things, but if that works for this story, then all the better. Please continue! I really like this story, and hope you write the next chapter soon. |
lilyoftheval5 6/12/09 . chapter 4I don't know about other reviewers, but I find the combination of time travel involving Tom and Harry irresistible. Not that I will read any drivel; but your story, despite being very simple so far, is also well-written. So, thanks for sharing. |
sighed-anonymous 6/12/09 . chapter 4I'm really interested on how this story will progress! Update soon! |
sliver of time 6/12/09 . chapter 4awesome story! i love the idea! keep it up! :D |
Mercuryembers2 6/12/09 . chapter 4 Great story, love stories in which harry goes back in time, and really like your characterisation of tom.. sugar high!... anyway you said next chapter Dumbledore and Diagon ally which I cant wait for. good luck and please update soon lol ME2 |
Samael the Parselmouth 6/12/09 . chapter 4UPDATE! |
Fk306 6/12/09 . chapter 4this is great I look forward to more |
lilyoftheval5 6/12/09 . chapter 3Like it! Has potential... |
Basilisk's Fang 6/11/09 . chapter 3Great work and not a slash! I can't ask for more! Ah, yes! Update :) Good job so far, I'll be watching this. Oh! and welcome to the Basilisk's Den |
pharaveej 6/11/09 . chapter 3This plot is forever classic. I'd never get tired of reading them. Every story has so many different point and scences that's too interesting. I can't wait to see more of what 's going to happen in your story. |
lenadon 6/11/09 . chapter 3This is story interesting, and while I find both the characterizations of Tom and Harry a tad farfetched (especially Tom; after ten years of desiring no sort of friendship at all, he jumps on Harry as soon as he discoverers their shared parseltongue ability? The friendship probably should have started off more apprehensively..), I'll admit this caught my eye. There are so many refreshing ways to execute this idea - and many cliched ways of doing them. I hope you take the former route, I'd love to see how their Hogwarts and post-Hogwarts years wears (or solidifies) their relationship and how it affects the wizarding world. Good luck! |
pococo 6/11/09 . chapter 3This story is good. Please update soon! |