hi i love your story so please continues ( sorry for my english i am french)

Just want to say sorry if this sounds realy mean but... The plot of the story is VERY good I'm extremily impressed. It dose, however, have horable righting. The way it's put into context is just plane bad. I know I sound like a snode but this is what I think. Again sorry to offend but try a different way of wrighting, it may be more fun. Still love the storry line the way the vampire is so mean to Seth is brelient. You realy brought out these people true nature. Hope to read more, can't wate to see wat's next.

aw

i really liked th ending to this chapter

yeah it was all fluff but it was sweet fluff 3

Aw you should do the wedding and some more since this was barely anything...

Aww. I love this chapter

Of course Alice is the one to come up with the evil plan to get them together! Please update soon! I love the story so far!

This chapter made me smile :)

It's really good.

This story is prety good. I love Seth. Your character also seems fairly realistic and I love the premise of a wolf imprinting on a vampire. Curious though, why is it all in bold font? anyway, I hope to read more soon

Lynn

It sounds interesting so far. Can't wait to read more.