The last sentence was excellent :D

Really good story. Thanks for posting ir :):)

Haha, brilliant ending and well tied in with the entire story.

-Knight 03

aw! so cute! nice work :-D

I liked most of it. But to me, this had too much going on! Alice barging in, Lucas barging in...too much interference with the plot.

I loved the part when Lucas hit James. WOw. and THEN James didn't hit him back! wow... thats a respectable thing.