Oh gosh...I really hope that you can continue this. I wanted more...

interesting concept for a story. one minor detail though cardiff is in wales not england

Is there more?

Interesting premise. I hadn't really considered, but I had been considering Jack to be unable to father children due to being un-killable (like "Highlander" immortals) - or is will adopted?

Would love to read more of this soon.

Up-DATE! Up-DATE! Up-DATE! Please! This is really well written, and the ONLY Sanctuary/Torchwood crossover. Plus I love the idea of Will as Jack's son. It seems to fit, somehoe.

Awesome Torchwood/Sanctuary crossover, can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
hm blonde girl with a motorcycle, I wonder if it's Ashley...hehe
~Tala-Paige~

Very good and believable start for this crossover. When I first saw Will, he reminded me of someone and now I can see bits of Jack in him.

Look forward to see what you do with this.
K