 xwannaflyx 2009-10-19 . chapter 8aw
cute! |
 gabby 2009-07-16 . chapter 7 i like it |
 1000GreenSun 2009-07-09 . chapter 6This is very interesting! I look forward to reading more! (It's not over, is it?) |
 Chaosmob 2009-06-22 . chapter 5Nice one, Joker has Bats all confused. hehehehe and Supes yelling at Batman was a nice one.
Cool your dad's name is Bruce Wayne. Does he have a bat cave hidden under your house?? hehehe ;)
Very good chapter.
Keep up the great work.
Chaosmob :) |
 DaisyJane 2009-06-16 . chapter 4I have so many idea of what could be going on but first of all I am happy that Diana is still alive for the moment. Is it a dream or something larger like Bats is in a coma. The fact that Batman is going after Ivy who has a gas that make you fall asleep make me suspicious. I really can't wait to see where you take this. Great Chapter. |
 Brooklyn Bullet 2009-06-15 . chapter 4Fantastic update, I'm sososososo glad Di isn't dead! This chapter reminded me a lot of the Sandra Bullock movie premonition. |
 DaisyJane 2009-06-11 . chapter 3Very dark chapter and nicely done. Bruce's heart is broken and he can't function because of the loss. Now how are you going to bring Diana back from the dead. Is this just some twisted nightmare or maybe a vision of the future. I can't wait to see what you write next. |
 MimaEtcy 2009-06-11 . chapter 3I love the way that you described the carnival. It was awesome, and the pearls were amazing too! I like your writing style. Please update soon, I would like to see what happens next. |
 Brooklyn Bullet 2009-06-11 . chapter 3Oh my God...Di...No! Well, you did say it wasn't the end so that means she might not really be dead, right? *hopeful face* |
 DJ 2009-06-10 . chapter 2 THAT WAS AWESOME!!XD About the Joker looks, he been draw
diffrenly three time. In the series of
Series
Batman (BTAS)
Batman (TNBA)
Justice League
Relax just tell you, there a website that can check out, if you want called . it cool, it show all the series
And AWESOME JOB WITH THIS CHAPTER! |
 The-Lady-Isis 2009-06-10 . chapter 2Hm. I'm definitely intrigued, update soon! |
 Chaosmob 2009-06-10 . chapter 2Damn very impressive story. Loving every bit of it. You captured the Joker very well. Hope the Dark Knight saves his Princess soon. Well before she knocks the jokers head off first. lol
Great chapter.
Keep up the great work.
Chaosmob :) |
 Chaosmob 2009-06-10 . chapter 1Great story to a fine mystery. Wonder why Bruce wouldn't give her Pearls? Dudes like mega rich, cheapskate. lol
Great chapter.
Keep up the fine work.
Chaosmob :) |
 Brooklyn Bullet 2009-06-09 . chapter 2I LOVE it so far. Great chap :) |
 DaisyJane 2009-06-09 . chapter 2The Joker or most probably Lex Luthor must have somebody working for them on the Watchtower. They must have someone to deliver the gifts and get them information. If Batman wasn't so worried about Diana he probably would have thought of that. Hopefully somebody else will it time to help Bats and Diana. I am really enjoying your characterizations as I think you are spot on with most of them. Can wait to see what happens next. |