Nicely done.

Great story, I'm so happy I found it I recently watched the movie again and I love it but, the ending leaves me a little disappointed. I wanted something along the lines of your story to happen, so I'm happy you wrote this

loved it!

You did NOT wreck this movie at all! This is what I WANTED to happen! D: I was so angry when he just drove off! *grumble*

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I prefer your ending to the actual one. I was kind of peeved Seth didn't stop, but I understand why he didn't.

Wow, this was magnificent! It followed along perfectly. I would love to see a sequel, maybe with some M rated lemony goodness. ;)

A definite addition to my favorites. )

I would love a sequal...please?

Love these kinds of fics, well done! Very good!

xoxoxo

great story!

nice to see seth's thoughts about it all!

i like your ending better than the movies

Watched it again the other night, the tattoo is my favorite. Wished they would have ended up together too.

Update! Update! Update!

You're very well in writing Seth by the way!

That was actually a good story. I didn't think it would be bc of your summary, bc it wasn't grammatically correct (I'm very anal about grammar lol) but it was good. Altho...do you really think Seth would be thinking about sex the whole time if he was being attacked by vampires? Idk, just a thought; I thought that part was unrealistic, but it was still a good story. Keep writing! :D

I love this. I also loved Clooney in this movie and the whole time I was thinking these thoughts. It is also how I thought the movie should end.

this was really good i liked it a lot when i first watched the movie i wanted seth and kate to get together so good story