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soraXkairi-4eva
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
good job! i like it, its really good.
starfirix
2009-10-17 . chapter 7
Wonderful collection. I liked the sixth one best.
starfirix
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
Aww! Really good.
Smartkitty314
2009-09-05 . chapter 7
Wow! These are amazingly well-written! I love this collection of stories! Thanks!
madpostman
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
Awesome story! A/P forever!
LethoBion
2009-08-06 . chapter 7
It ended with seven chapters D:.
I promise I don't say this to everyone, but this was the best collection of oneshots I've ever read.
WhispertheWolf
2009-08-02 . chapter 7
That was very well done, I think. I like keeping things canon, so marriages, next generations, and OCs really don't do for me. Add that to the pairing thing and, well . . . Me saying I like this one is REALLY a compliment.

Yeah, I like writing Aerrow for all the same reasons. It's amazing that people who don't like writing Aerrow think he's a paper cut-out of a hero. If they realized how much depth he had to him, maybe they might like writing him better.

Anyway, great job! Can't wait for "Shattered"! Guess I'll have to, though . . .
Doilan
2009-08-01 . chapter 7
Hey Dombe-girl!

thank you for recognizing the reviewers but it really isn't necessary, we review to give feedback not to gain praise but still it's a nice feeling lol.

I like the idea you didn't give the child a name, makes the reader think about what would Aerrow and Piper name their child and if you did some may not be happy with it so in this case playing the safe card was a wise choice.

I hope the professional writing goes well and I am looking forward to seeing you back here in a couple of months.

From the one they call Doilan.
Abysilityy
2009-08-01 . chapter 7
No complaints here, it was a great finish.
I can really see where you where coming with the end of the chorus leting away and picturing Aerrow with the baby. And, I also believe you when you say Aerrow is the most fun to write. His deeper emotions and serious attitude make it enjoyable to do (I know because I like having my story-vids oriented more to his perspective.)
Well, all in all thanks for the sweet read, and making Trading Yesterday a popular name in these parts, and beyond.

:)
BlueDragon123
2009-08-01 . chapter 7
Thanks for mentioning me. It's a shame you had to end the oneshots but then the song can only go on so long. Oh and BTW call me Blue.
Gatomon Fan 7
2009-08-01 . chapter 7
That was beautiful. Honestly it was, very in-depth and very much like any loving family =)

I hope you enjoy your break from writing.

Keep writing!
Midnight-Rose-Dew
2009-07-31 . chapter 7
That was super sweet. I loved it. And it defenitly was one of your best. Not the very best, but up there. I also feel special now. So we have to wait a month or so till you we see you agian. That sucks. Well if we have to wait month it better be soem good stories to look forward to. So keep up the great work.
jenergy
2009-07-31 . chapter 7
*crying* It was such a lovely story!

Jenergy
RubyGloomRocks
2009-07-24 . chapter 6
WOW i thought it was great and Funny and Romantic all at the same time!Great Job!
Demon Piper
2009-07-21 . chapter 6
i love this one "ur love is changing me" is awesome
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