Ahahahaha you kept Bella and Edward's "characters" perfectly in character.

Oh, Edward/Bella is...terrible, yet this was enjoyable to read. Maybe because I found a bit of a humourous side to it (with Bella and Edward being in "character").

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. I'm at the library too, so everyone's staring at me. XD

This was PERFECT! Exactly what I needed to read. Very in character, if you want to count the SMeyer-Sues/Stus as characters, in the real sense.

I loved the touches of Alice/Bella in here... awesomeness. So... HAHAHA!

Great fic. My sides hurt now. Rite mor, plz!

...I just lost my mind. XD

Oh, HCO. I cried when I read this. :P