WOW! That was AMAZING! I'm grinning widely like a total moron...stories like this tend to do that to me. i loved the flirty scenes and the dramatic/angsty scenes...i just loved the whole thing! please keep writing!

I liked it very much, specially the interactin between the happy couple and John's mother, also, the scene at the fountain when he convinces Marguerite to marry him. Good work.

I loved the story! Please right more soon.

I'm sick and doped up on meds- excuse me- I know I read this before and I have ABSOLUTLY no idea where. I remember I DID love it though. GREAT dream- wish it would come true already! Hope you write more fics soon!)