Thank you Luna for your awesome story. I am don with all of it now...what else have you written?

I enjoy very much how you write their lovemaking. You don't use some of the usual cliches and I appreciate that; its a breath of fresh air. I have loved all the angst and loveliness of this story and will miss it! ONe outtake to go...

what a fucking great HEA! A perfect ending! I love and adore this story! on to the outtakes...thank you for such a tumulutous story. I am now a big fan of your writing!

what a great ending. no baby for edward to take care of! bella and edward can have their HEA! yea! thanks for the ride. i know you finished this long ago, but I am just reading it now so it's all new to me!

always with the other shoe dropping...when will they get a break?

I love that he surprised her and came to the dance! and sex in a janitors closet! very cool...

forgive? yes...forget? no. they are 2 different things...they seem to be moving toward a better relationship, but since the story has only a few more chapters, what will happen to wrap this up so soon?

Edward has no say in who Alice dates! I know he's her big brother and all, but c'mon! His crack to Bella that he can kiss her anytime he wants is so arrogant...but hot!

what is Alice up to? why didn't Emma know about the pregnancy? there are some things we don't know about yet...is there a twist coming?

much better...they will figure it out...geez I live vicariously through these stories I read. aren't I pathetic...

such angst...

Oh Bella! self sabotage is a dangerous thing...I get that she doesn't want to lose herself for a man, but c'mon! I know Edward has a lot on his plate but he is trying!

Bella shouldn't lie to Edward about how she is feeling. It will poison them in the end...they have been through enough.

Those two are driving each other batty.

I remember now. I'm still reading this though. Its so damn good.