You should have continued on until they left the club with the merman...that way you could do his thoughts with Max on his lap. That would have be awesome to read.

Great job!

LoL, this is so funny, reading Alec's thoughts are so true. The guy sure likes to piss Maxie off... LOVE THAT!

great story

I love Alec and Max together. They so totally have a magic connection that works perfectly for them. You did a good job of portraying it. Nice work.

Over all, I like it. It's a little rough around the edges with some grammatical errors, but still enjoyable. I'd love to read your longer M/A fics, though.

Wow, that was great! I really really liked it! Keep it up and have fun, mate! I hope you'll make more stories like this, 'cause this one was great! Cya around pal! _
Take care,

ShalBrenfan

Alec is such a woose...why can't he say things like that outloud he says everything else outloud?

Love it! Love it!

Wonder if she would give me a dance?

LMAO! Very cute! 8oD

Pretty good. I always wondered what he was thinking! Keep up the great work!

Cute! :D This was a good idea. Alec's so funny!