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aoife aoibhell
2009-11-10 . chapter 12
Just wanted to say that I love this story! ;)
tacotail
2009-11-08 . chapter 12
thank u so much 4 updating. totally love this story
Angel1178
2009-11-08 . chapter 12
Love it!! Wonder if Colby will ever fully figure it out. Hope you update again soon!
minijo1990
2009-11-07 . chapter 12
Is it bad that I want Colby/Charlie/Jessica or Greg/Charlie/Jessica more than Don/Charlie? Your OC are just so very well developed.
deadsnowwhite
2009-11-07 . chapter 12
I could not stop reading it is an amazing story and I was only going to read the frist chapter or so and come back to read the rest but it was just to good to stop and now I'm going to beg for an update soon please! ^_^
Adri1577
2009-11-07 . chapter 12
Good chapter. I liked it. It was well worth waiting. I like your writing style and there is not a single mistake. It makes reading easier.
I liked the last Charlie's phrase “I’ll see them soon.” This should draw Colby's attention. After all, Charlie had never spent too much time with the military, not that the team knows :)
I love this story!
Well done!
PeanutTree
2009-11-06 . chapter 12
Ooh! Short, but sweet. I liked the interaction between Charlie and his lady friend. *wiggles eyebrows*
TenshiNanashi
2009-11-06 . chapter 12
Wow. Nice AU, I like militant Charlie. I also like his relationship with Krythan and Vahn.
I think its interesting that he love/hates Colby for the innate solider-ness of him. Mostly because I love Colby...but also because i think it's realistic.
kkj
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
for all that is holy in the world {puppies and chocolete}, please, PLEASE update this story
minijo1990
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
Just a quick note to humbly ask for more...please
Vaughan
2009-09-18 . chapter 11
Please update! this story is one of best I have found in a long time. It is wonderful how you weave together Charlie's life with the company and his life with the FBI, and I can't wait to find out how those two worlds will come together in future chapters.
Chica
2009-09-10 . chapter 11
this story is great, and I hope you update soon. I love storys like this but they are so hard to find.
Ms Bella Donna
2009-09-04 . chapter 11
Hey
Could you please update soon. I quite enjoy the stories where Charlie has the secret side and this is one of the only ones being worked on. Please update
stargatesg1973
2009-09-03 . chapter 11
I can't wait to see Don's face and everyone else's when Charlie comes in and takes over. Is Don going to hand this over just so easily to his, until now, academic minded little brother? Can they even work together as equals?

So many unanswered questions? Why do you do this?!

:)

Michelle
PeanutTree
2009-09-03 . chapter 10
Wow. You have no idea how much I love this fic. You've blended Charlie's TV life and his new background so well. I really love the way you've shown Charlie's need for Don. A lot of writers just make him come off as whiny, but you explain it as a brotherly kind of want, something that I (with siblings of my own) can understand well. And the relationships Charlie holds with everyone is so tender and beautiful. I think it's awesome that he's considered the sweetheart of the group.
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