 aoife aoibhell 2009-11-10 . chapter 12Just wanted to say that I love this story! ;) |
 tacotail 2009-11-08 . chapter 12 thank u so much 4 updating. totally love this story |
 Angel1178 2009-11-08 . chapter 12Love it!! Wonder if Colby will ever fully figure it out. Hope you update again soon! |
 minijo1990 2009-11-07 . chapter 12Is it bad that I want Colby/Charlie/Jessica or Greg/Charlie/Jessica more than Don/Charlie? Your OC are just so very well developed. |
 deadsnowwhite 2009-11-07 . chapter 12I could not stop reading it is an amazing story and I was only going to read the frist chapter or so and come back to read the rest but it was just to good to stop and now I'm going to beg for an update soon please! ^_^ |
 Adri1577 2009-11-07 . chapter 12Good chapter. I liked it. It was well worth waiting. I like your writing style and there is not a single mistake. It makes reading easier.
I liked the last Charlie's phrase “I’ll see them soon.” This should draw Colby's attention. After all, Charlie had never spent too much time with the military, not that the team knows :)
I love this story!
Well done! |
 PeanutTree 2009-11-06 . chapter 12Ooh! Short, but sweet. I liked the interaction between Charlie and his lady friend. *wiggles eyebrows* |
 TenshiNanashi 2009-11-06 . chapter 12Wow. Nice AU, I like militant Charlie. I also like his relationship with Krythan and Vahn.
I think its interesting that he love/hates Colby for the innate solider-ness of him. Mostly because I love Colby...but also because i think it's realistic. |
 kkj 2009-10-30 . chapter 1 for all that is holy in the world {puppies and chocolete}, please, PLEASE update this story |
 minijo1990 2009-10-04 . chapter 7Just a quick note to humbly ask for more...please |
 Vaughan 2009-09-18 . chapter 11 Please update! this story is one of best I have found in a long time. It is wonderful how you weave together Charlie's life with the company and his life with the FBI, and I can't wait to find out how those two worlds will come together in future chapters. |
 Chica 2009-09-10 . chapter 11 this story is great, and I hope you update soon. I love storys like this but they are so hard to find. |
 Ms Bella Donna 2009-09-04 . chapter 11Hey
Could you please update soon. I quite enjoy the stories where Charlie has the secret side and this is one of the only ones being worked on. Please update |
 stargatesg1973 2009-09-03 . chapter 11I can't wait to see Don's face and everyone else's when Charlie comes in and takes over. Is Don going to hand this over just so easily to his, until now, academic minded little brother? Can they even work together as equals?
So many unanswered questions? Why do you do this?!
:)
Michelle |
 PeanutTree 2009-09-03 . chapter 10Wow. You have no idea how much I love this fic. You've blended Charlie's TV life and his new background so well. I really love the way you've shown Charlie's need for Don. A lot of writers just make him come off as whiny, but you explain it as a brotherly kind of want, something that I (with siblings of my own) can understand well. And the relationships Charlie holds with everyone is so tender and beautiful. I think it's awesome that he's considered the sweetheart of the group. |