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Bunny11
2009-10-20 . chapter 8
That was really cute! I thought that ending was great. Much better than where you were planing on ending it.
Rezzalia
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
That was an amazing start to this story. I really liked it. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.

Oh, I favorited your story, by the way.
Kimi1313
2009-08-29 . chapter 8
I really like how you have written this up so far. Iori is an interesting child, hell, he seems to be becoming almost a son to Ryou more than an older brother, let's just hope that 'Sakura' doesn't find out that Kaoru is Endrance XD That wouldn't end well.

And I must say, I love how you finished that last chapter.
"I do." "Don't say it like that!" *happy sigh* Only Endrance can make moving in with someone sound like marriage ^.~

I do wish that this wasn't the end of the story though, but alas, we don't always get what we wish for.
Peppermint Mocha
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I can't even tell you how much I enjoyed this story! There's such a shortage of Haseo and Endrance stuff as it is, so this was wonderful to come across. ;w; You portrayed the characters perfectly, and I love how the story built up slowly to make it even more fun to read! So I'm going to beg you please, please, please write more of these two~! n_n Great fanfic, I loved it, can't wait to see more things from you~!
Yuki Hikaru
2009-08-10 . chapter 8
How sweet!!
-melts-
I really would like to read more about this couple, but it's true what you said about ending it rather than forcing yourself to continue without inspiration.
I love when Endrance said "I do" to Ryou when he asked him to move in. I just love it!
Anyway, this was great, but all good things must come to an end, no matter how awesome they were and what shame it is when it's over. See you around!
deadliest love for you
2009-07-31 . chapter 7
Hey sweet chapter hope you update soon I really like this story ^-^ thanks for writing it
Yuki Hikaru
2009-07-31 . chapter 7
YAY!
-does a happy dance-
That was so sweet!! Oh I love this chapter, is just perfect!
I love their interaction at the end!
I love everything to be honest, give me MORE!!
As soon as you can of course ^^
Yuki Hikaru
2009-07-23 . chapter 6
Oh, if Sakura ever finds out the Kaoru is her beloved master En... well that would be something way too funny to see. Oh the fuss she would make! *chuckles*
Anyway, things are getting interesting between Ryou and Kaoru. I'll look forward to how things progress between them!
Go Kaoru! Keep pushing forward, I'll be cheering for you!
Yuki Hikaru
2009-07-15 . chapter 5
Go Kaoru! Glare into submission anyone that dares to even try to come between you and Haseo!!
Oh I love the interaction between Ryou and Kaoru, they are just too cute *nods*
I feel a little for Silabus, but Ryou is just not for him, he belongs to Kaoru *nods*
As always I look forward to further updates and how these two relationship evolves.
Kyuubi
2009-07-15 . chapter 5
Very nice chapter. I am really glad you have keep up with the story despite low reviews. You are very talented and have done a wonderful job keeping people in character and giving life to their off line lives. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to see where this continues. Once again great job!
Yuki Hikaru
2009-07-14 . chapter 4
*drools* I love fics when Kaoru and Ryou meet in real life, and you made such a great job writting them that I'm in love with this story.
I'll look forward to your updates.
Ika
2009-07-06 . chapter 4
*squeal* 8D !
*can't stop fangirling* Oh god. Kaoru sneaking up to Haseo to do... *happy* Oh I love you so, marvelous author that you are! ♥
タィーキー
2009-06-28 . chapter 3
Keep it up. ^^ The wording and the grammar seemed better than last time, and I like how the story is progressing.
Vix
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
I like this a lot. I haven't read all of the words in a fanfic in quite a while...not until this one.Please, continue. It was very enjoyable. The personalities are great.

Hehehe, "Haseo..."
タィ-キ-
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
=3 I hope you keep it up, this is pretty good.

A few things, though:

-The way you write dialog is a little confusing.
-The grammar needs a little touch up. You can just have a few people proof read it for mistakes you might have missed yourself.
-A little more description would be nice. =3
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