Very well detailed.
It's very believable and accurate. :)
Great little story.

you should make this into a story like what happen after Susie get to come home from the hospital pleas from blossom 109

Good one. Susie could come back and say "Angelica, my operation didn't hurt but I heard my Mom saying you'd need a painful one."

Very good one. Nice job giving a background to a real episode.

Keep the good writing.