 Trinity Destler 2009-10-13 . chapter 1Lovely, but so sad. I was hoping for a bridge across the chasm, even if only for a moment. |
 ShakNali 2009-06-13 . chapter 1This was very good. You captured Illya quite well, as well as the young lady's reactions to him and the whole situation. Thanks for sharing. |
 Uncle Charlie 2009-06-10 . chapter 1As always artfully and wonderfully handled. You have such a way with both the guys, making them human, but never allowing the reader to forget the very nature of their existence, much less thier chosen career path.
Thanks for the tour and a great story!
C |
 Niece of the Prophet Zarquon 2009-06-10 . chapter 1Lovely story, deceptively simple and very touching. |
 m klindt 2009-06-09 . chapter 1I loved your story! I don't remember seeing on File 40 or FanFice before this? I must have been blind not to have see or remember this one. All my best, Michelle |