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Reviews for: Memory Lapse
Jenivi7
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
Ha! That was adorable! I LOVE how Mokie just totally and completely didn't recognize her XD
arashi wolf princess
2009-06-10 . chapter 1
Poor Mokuba, he didn't recongize shizuka. I wouldn't mind reading a story of Jou's and Mai's duel in front of the students in the academy that helps them get together.
Unique Art
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
This was cute. I found it funny. Mokuba's thoughts were priceless! The whole idea was believeable and a little different than some of the others. Nice job and good luck in the contest!
Detonate
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Hm.. I liked that. I actually liked that. I thought it was really funny when Mokuba realised who he was talking to. She gave him some questions so he could pull himself out, but no!
Are you sure he is losing?
Yes.
There is no chance of him winning?
No.

Well, that wasn't very good for him.
I loved the ending too. The last sentence: "'Right,' Mokuba replied, his turning around not having anything to do with making sure she didn't get lost."

I so loved that !??!
Good Luck
Nemisor
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Well I liked this one, it was sweet. Poor Mokie, didn't recognize Shizuka, got all embarrased. :) Oh well that happnes.
As a side note: You play Twilight-n00b-horrifying game too? Cool. :D I love that game, and every single version of it!
Well good luck!
*hugs*
-Nem
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