heehee, nice :D

A very entertaining story, but I do get lost sometimes with your spelling and grammar. I have to say, though, that Wash's voice is pretty much perfect!

hahaha oh man I love it can't wait for more :D

no worries thanks for the update. love the river/jayne dinamic.

Oh good lord, PLEAse, finish this. it was just too great.

I like the idea: it's quite inventive. But it would be even easier to read without puzzling over spelling and punctuation. Please, please, please spell-check and punctuation-check, or run it past a beta who's a stickler for such things. Properly dressed out, this story would glide over you like oiled silk.

I love the idea of River & Simon "letting their hair down" and the whole "The Alliance Sucks" thing ROCKS!
Well written, and great job at Characterization.
My only critique, is if you're going to list it as POST BDM; it needs to be completely post bdm or maybe list it as AU if you wanted to leave certain characters in it. :)
Great job; enjoyable fic!

This is awesome! Update asap, please! This rocks, and so do you!
-rach

Gotta get more, this is HILARIOUS i'm busting a gut over here!

hahahahaha oh you have to update hilarious i wanna read about them drunk !

Fun story, I'm looking forward to hearing the explanations from Simon and River :-)

oh
i wanna know what they actually did
can i recommend an extra proof read, there are just some errors that the extra check would pick up
otherwise great
-ca

Ah! this story is hilarious!

and is that a light drizzeling of rayne I see? :)

It's full of typos and River's constant third-person is thoroughly off-putting.

This story is so great because it's crazy enough to be in Firefly but realistic to again actually, be in Firefly. Fabulous.