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Indochine Ramera
2009-06-29 . chapter 5
That was absolutely great. All of them! Great!!
Keep up the good job!!
TCGeek
2009-06-28 . chapter 5
OMGG, this chapter seriously made my whole MONTH. SO BEYOND ADORABLY CUTE *heartheart*

It was just, perfectly written. Absolutely spot on, emotions, characters, Derek being a nervous mess, the setting, storyline, everything. You especially know how to write these two in such a way that I can't ever seem to get enough, and that's why you CAN'T LEAVE EVER. EVEER.

So yeah I loved it. Beyond loved it - I'm still smiling like an idiot. (*half wants to admit she almost cheered with the fictional characters*) Sigh..

You're awesome.
Parsat
2009-06-28 . chapter 5
You have saved the best for last, it looks. Very sweet.
TCGeek
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
This one was cute. At the beginning I was like, "the ear? wtf?", but you pulled it off quite nicely. :) I love these two as a pair...

And DerekxAngie chapter next?! WOO! :D
Parsat
2009-06-12 . chapter 4
Wonder why Naomi always has to surprise Sidney...haha.
Parsat
2009-06-11 . chapter 3
Ah, long time no see. Glad to see someone writing in the old style...simple and sweet. The second chapter in particular, with Angie and Sidney friendship was very intriguing; you managed to write it without a hint of sexual tension, which is difficult to do. The Italian titles are also a nice touch. Overall, hope to see more updates from this!
TCGeek
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Aw, I didn't think this one was bad at all! It's Cybil and Greg - it's really hard to fluff them because they're just not those people... you know? They're those stereotypical "horny because we're old and stubborn and nobody else is good enough for us" kind of people. :)

That said, you did awesome at keeping them in character and making the story believable - and hot. I loved it.
TCGeek
2009-06-09 . chapter 2
Derek and Angie forever INDEED.

One update a day? I'm more excited than ever right now. I said it before, and I'll say it again - I absolutely love your stuff.

And yes! Sidney and Angie can be friends - but when I got the email notification and it said Sidney and Angie I was like, "oh nononono", haha. But this turned out so cute - for something so weird for them to do you kept them perfectly in character the whole time, with the little hints of DxA that I love. Just perfectly done, that's all I have to say! :)

I love these - will be waiting for more!
Catching Rain
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
Ahh, that was so cute! At first I thought resplendently was a made-up word, so I looked it up, and lo and behold it was real! I have to applaud Tyler for his smoothness. :D
TCGeek
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
YAY! I was hoping you were going to come back soon! I'm so excited!!

This was adorable - perfectly Tyler, with his dictionary cheating. :) I know what chain letter you're talking about - I used to get it all the time and I hate it.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to more! See you around!
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