I read this story twice through, which was not difficult as it's a wonderful story, but I am completely confused. When did Holtz meet Rose? What did she say to him? Who are Conal (Colin?), Ronan, Morgan, etc. What did Conal rule? I'd love some background on the characters. Sebastian was, I believe, the name of an Inquisitor on Babylon 5. Same person? As I said, I enjoyed the story tremendously. I just wish I understood it better.

Very good, but I must admit I got really confused by Colin/Conal as his name kept changing throughout this chapter...might want to fix that...or maybe I just missed something...which could be the case.

*poke* Write more, you evil girl.

I like it alot so far. I can't wait to read more of it. I really hope he learns Ronan's backstroy for my sake. I am very curious.]

Hey, cool start! I'd love to read more.. once you've rested up, of course! Happy Holidays!