I like the story but is this really the end? It's really sad... Sigh... why do they have to part? Wah...

Please tell me when the next stories are coming out! I really enjoyed reading this one, and I want to read the rest. I don't want it to stay hanging like this. Please write more, I promise to review!

really really good kept me hooked through the whole thing! : 3

Enjoyable, but WAY too short. Please keep writing :D

I'm really wondering where you're going to take this story! thnx for the update!

AAWW! WHAT?! a dream?! How could you do that…! haha, that was damn sneaky, an i don like it! but i trust you. you have a talent for showing the energy of every moment… each second lasting a rich and long span of time, full of emotions. that's really good. shamelessly i must admit that when you made van seem all grown up, i was afraid i would miss the old van, since his reckless awkward ferocious adorableness is basically why i love 'im. but you've still got him with a lot of intensity, so i look forward to reading more of your tale.

much respect and stuff,
kal

URGH! What a teaser! That's so unfair! please update soon, before I salivate too much on my keyboard...

Good update!

I really like this, I think it's really good. careful your spelling errors. The last chapter you ruined a sentimental moment by misspelling shirt... no R... yeah... anyway, I just finished the series and felt really cliff hanger about it, so thank you for getting me through that. Please add more soon.

~Denra

evil cliffy! great chapter though!

that was so sweet! great update!

aw i like it. i like how you've kept van the same he's cute when he's kinda shy. good chapter. cant wait for your next one :D xx

this is good, keep it up. :D x

that was so sweet of van!

I think it made sense. I liked it! Again, a great look into the mind of the older, wiser, more mature Van! ^_^ And he's still as cute as ever!
So... now what's going to happen? I'm looking forward to finding out.