That was great :3 so cute! Fics like these make me love this pairing even more.

OMG this is like the Dexion version of the Sora show good job! totally loved it :)

Wow... This was the first Zemyx fic that I've ever read. Like, I've read them in stories where they're side pairings to Akuroku or Soriku or whatever. (::cough::Seiner::cough::... M... Seiner...)
But yeah. They're REALLY cute! Hyper-active Demyx... though after playing Days he seems like he's more just lazy and random not always on a sugar high. He's just really cute on a sugar high and I can't picture him any other way in fanfic xD
Anyways, yeah. Cute story!
::goes to read more of your stuff::
-Axel's Roxas

okay first of all this story was awesome and uber funny.
i love zemyx oh-so much.

but what i really want to comment on is the way you had demyx suggest skinny dipping.
i seriously have a friend who acts like that.
like no joke, it was like you were channeling him,
"Nakey-time!"
lmfao xD

I laughed so hard through out the entire thing x''D



Wonderfully done~

Haha, that's cute.
I like Demyx's sneakiness.
Nice job!

The hole time I'm reading I was like omg this reminds me of touchmykeyblade

and then at teh bottom you said that and I was like
HA!I win!

i started laughing when I realize around the time when he wanted to go swimming and then...then the 'there's something in you mouth' I practically passed out from laughing cuz i regconized it from TOuchMyKeyblade

Ahh I knew it was from Youtube!! I loved that video!

That was SO funny! I've never been huge into Zemyx (I did like it though) but now I LOVE them!! I think this was actually my first purely Zemyx fanfic to have ever read...and it was AWESOME!

You seriously rock. That was great! I loved it! The way you portrayed Demyx was especially great! I need to go back and read more of your fics now! Wonderful job!

XD de-caf! lol
mwa hahaha, i wasn't expecting that.

no! its was just bordering lemon! sigh, why did you have to put an end to it when it was getting good?

OMG! demmy's a freaking GENIUS!
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Haha, I noticed! I was like.. naked.. swimming... gummy bears? Then I looked at the title and was all... Yep. Thank you TouchMyKeyblade for the awesome stuff you guys inspire XD