Oh my God I Love it!

Aww... I'm not the biggest Robin fan but I think Don/Robin are a good couple. This was tres cute and I could so see this happening on NUMB3RS especially the last bit. I love the sentence about nobody saying nothing because they might be wrong, I did that to my sister one time, she wasn't amused though. Yes Colby, ever the wit.

I loved this! You really got the characters spot on in my opinion. Robin would think things through for a couple days first and I could just picture Don's reaction in my head. Also love how Alan noticed right away. :) Nice job!

This was beautiful. I think you nailed it perfectly when Robin hesitated at first to tell Don. She would think it out herself first, consider all her options. She's a very strong woman and she would see this first as a decision SHE needed to make.

Similiarly, Don would be shocked, stunned, terrified - then the slow grin would appear and he would be excited and thrilled. You nailed both of them.

And I LOVED that Alan noticed something was up the minute they walked in the house.

You write with such an easy flow and enjoyable pace I think it would fit will with a continuation; with Alan hovering and Charlie obsessing and Don just trying to deal with it all. Then, of course, you need to write about the birth. You don't have anything else to do, right?

Well done and thanks a bunch for sharing it with us.

I loved it. It was short and to the point. Any chance of writing a sequel?