 N. Forest 2009-12-10 . chapter 15This was a very sad chapter. I felt so sorry for Severus and I hope that's he's able to heal, on both the inside and the outside. Of course with Light Arrow watching him hopefully it will be harder for him to hurt himself. Doc Martens seems like a nice man and a good doctor. I hope we get to see more of him.
Good chapter! |
 excessivelyperky 2009-12-05 . chapter 10Oh, good chapter--I'm glad all three were able to talk about how they felt, and not just get angry. |
 tatze85 2009-12-04 . chapter 15Hi! das kapi ist toll... aber ich hätt gern mal wieder was von harry gehört/gelesen!;-) hoffentlich sind deine betas diesmal ein bissi flotter! *g*
Was harry and his new family angeht... das mit dem tot war in kapi 50 oder 51... mit diesem vogel... wenn man ihn sieht, stirbt jemand, der einem sehr nahe steht... ich hab dich im review gefragt ob jemand stirbt und du hast mit ja geantwortet... deshalb hab hab ich nochmal nachgefragt... also stirbt keiner? *puh*
bis bald deine
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 qwerty 2009-12-03 . chapter 15 I hope you won't haveHarry instanrly over whatever problem it is he has with horses, if he's really afraid of them, like it seemed, please don't change it just because it's a 'special chosen' horse. Otherwise, I find your story perfect. |
 Jenna 2009-12-03 . chapter 15 :) |
 notwolf 2009-12-02 . chapter 15Oh, Severus, doing the things you tell the boys not to do. Poor guy, it kills him to break down in front of someone. |
 Griffin Raven 2009-12-02 . chapter 15Truly another brilliant chapter! It seems that no matter what age a person is we seem to often regress sometimes when dealing with some issues/or problems. This is what Severus seems to be doing, asserting that he's an adult and not wanting to talk about things that bother him. Which is undoubtably a result of how Severus grew-up as a child even before he joined slytherin house at hogwarts which only reinforced this self-belief of hiding/masking ones feelings. Despite giving clear signs that he doesn't want to talk about his problems, the fact that Severus stayed with Doc Martin and even more so at the camp suggests he does want help. I know some one argue he's only staying to help the boys...but I feel that after so long hiding behind his mask as a spy to MoldyShorts he's loss touch with himself. Also Severus seems to desperate want/and need someone else to take care of him and the boys, so that he doesn't have to share the burden alone. |
 jennifer 2009-12-02 . chapter 15 Harry and Draco are ok,but please dont take too long to get the story line back to Severus. |
 jimmy-barnes-13 2009-12-01 . chapter 15Good chapter :) |
 Alo Amicus 2009-12-01 . chapter 15Wow. This is a pretty amazing story. Do you have any idea if this kind of touchiness all the time is realistic? I'd imagine so, but I was just wondering. |
 jennadancer 2009-12-01 . chapter 15 Love this story!! I am so excited to be getting new chapters. I can't wait!! Great job! Good handling of very important topics. |
 blackdragonofslytherin 2009-12-01 . chapter 15Luv how ur story is going and can't wait to see what happens next.
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 JWOHPfan 2009-12-01 . chapter 15Hooray, an update! Loved it, though I'm looking forward to the next chapter with more on Harry and Draco. |
 guerre sainte 2009-12-01 . chapter 15Looking forward to the next chapter~ :D |
 kittyfiction2008 2009-12-01 . chapter 15*huggles* I'm so happy that you updated.. I love this new chapter! please update again soon! |