you're right, howl's moving castle is awesome. Have you watched the studio ghibli version? BTW, great fanfic. XD

o this is great, wish the chapters were longer though!=)

It's an interesting concept to purposely not include detail or serious thought...specifically when you know you can easily. I am curious of what motivation you must have...whether it be laziness or even simply to mock the "Zutara clichés” you speak of. I am reading this because of my curiousness of you as an author and my wonders of what "Zutara clichés" you can include.

I love the story, 'cept it got better in the middle. the beginning wasn't that great. I don't like beginnings with "once upon a time..." and i think the chapters could be a bit longer. Otherwise, it's great!

Nice but quick story!!